Soar
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By Tomasz
Chunk 8
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Up, up and away, Lukas was back on track flying in the sky.
Lukas glanced, gleared and gassed over at Mara.
Lukas goes above the clowds and as he look’s around he sees all of his friends and family.
Lukas Races over to the front of his Ship.
Then opens up the : Little Tiny Miniature Bag.
Inside the bag was the Most Shiniest Sparkliest and Smalist Star In the World.
Lukas take it out of the Bag and Pushed it in the Sky.
As Lukas Pushis the Star in the sky it dress of in its shining Glory.
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