Show not tell

 This week for writing we were learning what show not tell is. so it mean to show something and not tell it, and we had to write one about our Tūrangawaewae. that means a place to stand.

and this is my one hope you like it.

Cool clear cold water, crunchy crispy chippy fish and chips.   

The air is as fresh as a ready barked cookie.    

And Margaret many is a storm of joy.

This is the best place because it is so much fun.

This Is the best place because it is teaming with nature.

This is the best place because you can see the Maori culture everywhere.

you can do so many fun things here,

Like going on a Waka,

Or go to the museum and see some of our culture.

Can you guess were mine is?

Sentence Expansion

 Sentence Expansion

We are leaning to use a strategy that helps us expand sentences.

1, They had an argument

When: Two weeks ago.

Where: In the car.

Why: About a song.

Two weeks ago in the car they had an argument about a song.

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2, Oscar Cried

When: At night.

Where: At his house.

Why: When he had to go to bed.

At night Oscar cried at his house because he had to go to bed.

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is this a tectonic that you have used before?