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Monday, August 9, 2021

Pollution is a problem (target writing)

 Pollution is a problem
This week for target writing we had to write one paragraph about why pollution is a problem. In my paragraph I had a statement question and a command, I also had simple sentence compound sentence and a complex sentence.
Here is my paragraph




If you did this how will you paragraph be like about pollution?

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1 comment:

  1. Jo EarlAugust 11, 2021 at 4:10 PM

    Kia ora Tom - great idea to highlight the types of sentences. I am not sure that you have all the highlighting correct?

    In recent years, pollution has increased by a lot which is hurting our animals and environment. - This is a complex sentence.

    Have another look and see if you can change the highlighting to be correct.

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