Dragon
This week for target writing (witch is my writing for this week) we had to wring nine sentences about a pitcher of a small dragon and at least two of the sentences had to be complex sentences. I did four complex sentences because I thought two was not going to be enough.
Here is my work
What will your nine sentences be like?
Hi Tomasz, I was impressed before I had even read your dragon piece! You challenged yourself to write 4 complex sentences, opposed to the two that was required - ka pai! Also, your use of interesting language e.g 'ancient' and 'the castle dated back millions of years', gave me a strong picture of how old the building was. The dragon reminded me of a Unicorn. Not necessarily but what it looked like, but how you described it. It was magical and could make things float. The blurb before your actual post is really useful for the reader, therefore it's important that this part is proof read well, too. What I'd like to know is, how would you describe the dragons personality? Kind or scary!?
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